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Project Description:
For this project in English Composition 1, we were asked to
create an essay based on a topic we believe needs improvement. For my topic I
wanted to focus on the industry I plan to dive into after I graduate, which is
the gaming industry. My essay was about the need for independent (or Indie)
developers to execute good PR and marketing strategies, which is essential for
their success.
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Feedback Received:
My instructor and peers asked me to change my introductory
paragraph to reflect the message of the entire essay sooner. They felt the
message/topic was better explained in the second paragraph. I was also asked to
use more quotes from the references I found to better communicate the need for
good PR in the independent gaming industry. Finally, I was asked to make small
changed to my References page.
Resources Utilized:
For this project I needed access to Microsoft Office
software. I used Microsoft Word to complete this project.
Best regards,
Taylor Kearney
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