Today I’ll be reviewing Jermaine Lockett’s week two Assembly
Cut assignment.
Here is the ling to Jermaine's video.
Reflect: Jermaine, I thought your video was very interesting
because you decided to focus on the issue of pit bulls and there perception in
society. I thought this idea was cleaver and I appreciated the use of the child
playing with the pit bull and puppy so people get a real sense of the dogs true
nature.
Inquire: Did you mean to make your entire video about pit
bulls or did you mean to include some facts about yourself and your experience
into the video as well?
Suggest: I think that you may want to consider lowering the
audio or even muting the audio from the footage with the child, because it made
it difficult to hear what you were saying. I think it would also be useful to
add more footage to your fine cut so each clip is roughly 10 seconds long. It
may also be useful to have a solid color palette throughout the video.
Evaluate: I think you could add more emphasis to your video
by capturing yourself with the dog. Overall I think you did a good job and you’re
well on your way to a great video!
Best regards,
Taylor Kearney
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