My three major changes to my Digital Story are
my story, my visual images, and sound.
With the feedback given to me by my peer review
and my professors’ review I decided I needed to change the sentence structure
of my story. I needed to add more to it, give more details, and explain certain
areas of my story better, to give the listener a better understanding of my
story. So I revised my story and made changes to my sentence structure and added more details.
I then decided that my images needed to be more
appealing to my audience. They needed to be more compelling. I went through my
own images from when I was a hair stylist and when I lived in California to
pull personal details into my video. I also grabbed images that were taken of
me working for Nintendo at PAX.
The last detail I changed was the background sound. I felt
that the sound I’d used in my prior video was drowning out my voice too much.
I decided to find some different music and adjust the volume at a suitable
level. This way the music is secondary to my voice.
Best regards,
Taylor Kearney
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